Help anyone? please?

ok, so im doing my ancient history ignemnt but im only half finished, dont worry i know i have to do it! but someone with anyediting skill who woudl have a look over it woudl be soo much appriciated. its late, and iv had exams all day and i just need to sleep, help a girl out? i can send it to you, just chuck us yoru email yeah? love you forever